| DEALBREAKER Donald Trump and the Unmaking of the Iran Nuclear Deal Scott Ritter Seymour Hersh (Foreword) Atlanta: Clarity Press, November 2018 |
Rating: 5.0 High |
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| ISBN-13 978-0-0-9998747-5-2 | ||||
| ISBN-10 0-0-9998747-5-6 | 325pp. | SC/GSI | $29.95 | |
| Page 35: | "At this parade, Iran unveiled a new 1200-range ballistic missile named Khorramshahr, in honor of the Iranian border city devastated during the Iran-Iraq War." |
| Missing word: S/B "1200-mile-range" (presuming American units of measure). |
| Page 62: | "On August 18, 2002, the MEK (acting through its public relations front, the National Council for Resistance of Iran, or NCRI) gave a briefing in Washington, DC where it provided detailed information about what it claimed was undeclared nuclear activity in Iran related to covert nuclear weapons program." |
| The Glossary lists "MEK" but not "NCRI." |
| Page 64: | "Moreover, the nuclear material was being stored at a previously undeclred facility, the Jabr Ibn Hayan Multipurpose Laboratories (JHL) located at the Tehran Nuclear Research Center (TNRC)." |
| Neither "JHL" nor "TNRC" is listed in the Glossary. |
| Page 109: | "...and it was time for the rest of the world to accept it as such and deal with Iran responsibly by accepting it's right to nuclear power for peaceful purposes..." |
| Grammar: S/B "its". |
| Page 154: | "Such a channel, in fact, already existed through the P-5 plus 1 talks then underway, coordinated by Saeed Jalili..." |
| Missing space: S/B "under way". |
| Page 240: | "Under this deal, If Iran doesn't change its behavior..." |
| Capitalization: S/B "if". |
| Page 271: | "With the decision to withdraw from the JCPOA a done deal, all that was left for Trump to do was clean up his foreign policy team and, in true reality—star fashion, carefully choreograph how the decision would be conveyed to the public." |
| Punctuation: S/B "reality-star," changing M-dash to plain old dash. |
| Page 273: | "On April 30, 2018, without any forewarning or fanfare, Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu took the stage at a conference room in the in Kirya, the Israeli Defense Ministry Headquarters located in downtown Tel Aviv." |
| Extra words: S/B "in". |
| Pages 313-314: | "The Iranian people would support its government refusing to bend a knee in the face of American threats; they would not support a government that surrendered their hard-won gains on the nuclear front, for which the Iranian people suffered greatly to achieve." |
| Sentence construction: S/B either "for which the Iranian people suffered greatly" or "which the Iranian people suffered greatly to achieve". |
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