| THE APPROACHING STORM Alan Dean Foster New York: Del Rey Books, January 2002 © 2002 Lucasfilm, Ltd. & TM. All rights reserved. Used under authorization. |
Rating: 4.0 High |
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| ISBN-13 978-0-345-44300-7 | ||||
| ISBN-10 0-345-44300-4 | 344pp. | HC | $26.00 | |
| Page 62: | "...Kyakhta saw that the visitors were unaccompanied by a local guide." |
| Continuity breaks at the top of the next page, where the Jedi and their Padawans stroll along "listening to the spoken explanations of their guide..." (Another reader caught this too.) |
| Page 93: | "As Master Yoda says, there are many paths through life..." |
| "Master"? Hmnph! Called something more than "Master" should he not be, hmmmn? |
| Page 96: | "Convex lavender-hued eyes studies his clients blankly..." |
| Yes, all functional eyes are convex. The word is used here in lieu of "bulging", which would be accurate but for its connotation of an abnormal condition. |
| Page 192: | "'Don't touch that!' She slapped the probing fingers away from her belt. The notion of a lightsaber in the hands of an unruly, combative, slightly rowdy Gwurran was more than a little unsettling." |
| Why? It's been established that a lightsaber can be keyed to its owner's unique bioelectric signature. Keyed to your biopattern your lightsaber should be. |
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